If anyone has ever read a story that makes you wonder, "What was the point?" that would probably be because the writer did a poor job of using the narrative structure outlines. Which I feel is what happened with my in class writing assignment on Thursday. Yes, if you read the whole story, it finally makes sense in the end, and maybe that is, subconsciously, what I was trying to do. I took the long way around by giving an example of what the theme was. I believe that every person who reads this has had the misfortune of vomiting at least once in their life, so with the sensations that I mentioned, there was a good chance that people remembered how they felt during that time also. I believe the setting could use a bit of work, and the plot could definitely use some help, but that's the point of the first draft. Getting the idea on paper so that you can go over it later and correct what needs to change was the goal.
As the audience of the story is Mr. Marchant, I hope that he does not read it directly following a meal. I believe that every person in this class has had the opportunity to be sick, whether they wanted it or not. Therefore, I believe every person could put themselves into my situation. However, since the story was about myself as a teenaged girl, the intended audience was definitly not the male sex. My reasoning behind it was that I recently had a similar experiece, and it reminded me of the moment that I had buried in my memories.
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